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Two Breaths Walking

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Luna Akimine ver
just doodling xD
no. luna does NOT have black hair.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

When was the last time I gave a critique...quite some time ago. My skills a bit rusty <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" title=":P (Lick)"/>

Anyway, first I really like the glowing effect of the picture. It gives a soft feel and a "glimmering" effect. The flowers on the top of her head are quite well done, and I have to praise you for that!

I also like the color scheme of the blue standing out. It makes the audience attracted to her eye especially.

Hm, what bothers me however is her hands. They seem quite quickly done. The shading is also a bit lacking; it feels a bit too "soft" and doesn't really bring out the facial details like her lips. The rose on her eye also lacks a bit of shading.

Other than that, it's a good picture, and I really like the flowers on her head. Keep it up <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>